Standard Posted by Juju Posted on February 17, 2015 Posted under Poetry Comments 1 Comment Journey I wish one day to sail away Out upon the ocean sway Join all the sea creatures at play Jaunt the seas the rest of my days Only touch land to frolic in the sand Love, Judy Angelheart Copy right 2014 all rights reserved Advertisements Share this:EmailShare on TumblrPocketTweetPrintMoreLike this:Like Loading... Related Daily Prompt: JourneyPoetryPoetry 201 Post navigation ← In His Eyes Uber Exuberance → One thought on “Journey” You’re right, not entirely limericky, but it’s so careefree and jolly (did I really use the word ‘jolly’? Oh well.) I particularly like the way you structured the last line, too – so what does it matter. If you were a purist you may have scrapped the poem, and that would have been a loss. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Your thoughts... Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) w Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.