Journey

I wish one day to sail away

Out upon the ocean sway

Join all the sea creatures at play

Jaunt the seas the rest of my days

Only touch land to frolic in the sand

Love,

Judy Angelheart

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One thought on “Journey

  1. You’re right, not entirely limericky, but it’s so careefree and jolly (did I really use the word ‘jolly’? Oh well.) I particularly like the way you structured the last line, too – so what does it matter. If you were a purist you may have scrapped the poem, and that would have been a loss.

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